TheJourney Posted December 25, 2010 I've always thought I would be good at poetry, and my horoscope even says that I would be, but i've never really tried it. Anyways, I know absolutely nothing about poetry but I figured it would be fun to try to make some spiritual poetry. This is my first attempt at a poem, like, ever, so don't be too harsh but let me know if there's something about poetry I should know which I apparently don't.   All things are changed Situations rearranged But what keeps it moving? How can impermanency Continue so permanently?  There is a stillness You may call it utter bliss The nature of this Is chaos and transience  So there is the all The transcendent Through which all things hear its call Eternally in flux Its nature not changing at all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaron Posted December 25, 2010 Hello TheJourney, Â Very nice. I think you did a fine job. Â Aaron Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
