suninmyeyes

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Great contributions!

 

Great original work T S!

 

I love it!

 

I got some new ones comin' on my blog soon.

 

The prophet speaks.

 

Rock n roll baby.

 

I just teasin' ya.

 

I had em in me notebooks for months.

 

They tell a story.

 

Tell ya what, I'll carry on as long you keep giving me likes.

 

I really like likes.

 

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If anyone is interested I am adding some footnote links to my poems on my blog.

 

Shameless self promotion!

 

But it adds to the meaning of the poems.

 

Surely someone, somewhere is getting the odd chuckle out of my poems.

 

I know they're mad.

 

Mad as a hatter.

 

Mad as hell.

 

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A shameless plug

Captain Mar-Vel has added to his blog.

Kind words for

The Tao Bums.

 

Thank you, Capt. Mar-Vel

For your presence in our community;

Your heart and soul

Have quickly become

An unveiled light

Sitting atop the hill.

 

The words in your blog

And your posts

Dig down to the bottom of my soul

And resonate with truth.

The resonance I do not hear

With my ears or with my mind

But with my heart.

 

You ring True.

True as the purest bell

Greeting the dawn

And calling others

To their inner awareness.

 

I've not met you face to face,

I know not what you look like

And yet, because our souls communicate

In an intimate way

I am proud to call you

My brother and my Friend.

 

Love, Manitou

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Oh wow.

 

I'm not used to that sort of thing!

 

Your words mean everything to me.

 

Every Thing.

 

First of all many apologies if I say odd things, I am a naturally gifted shaman and things happen. Don't hesitate to let me know if my contributions are not welcome.

 

Lastly.

 

I've not met you face to face,
I know not what you look like
And yet, because our souls communicate
In an intimate way
I am proud to call you
My brother and my Friend.

Love, Manitou

 

You do now, kiddo!

 

What fun this all is!

 

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I'd love to found a school for creative writing or something. Wouldn't that be nice?

 

I thought of a name.

 

No, not that!

 

Ha ha ha.

 

What about Universal College of the Illuminating Eye?

 

Er..

 

U C I E

 

You see!

 

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Damn that's a good poem, Suninmyeyes! We need a lot more like him. His ideas are within reach too, something everybody can do.

 

Just stand up.

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For anyone interested, I'm updating my blog (see link below in sig) with seven or so poems I have had in my notebooks for months.

 

Probably should upload 'em to the blog now.

 

There you go, first one's up!

 

Go on, click through the archive links too.. plenty of fun stuff there!

 

I don't get paid for it, you know.

 

It's solely for the benefit of Mankind!

 

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For anyone interested, I'm updating my blog (see link below in sig) with seven or so poems I have had in my notebooks for months.

 

Probably should upload 'em to the blog now.

 

There you go, first one's up!

 

Go on, click through the archive links too.. plenty of fun stuff there!

 

I don't get paid for it, you know.

 

It's solely for the benefit of Mankind!

 

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Enjoying :-) :-) :-)

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