dawei Posted March 3, 2017 Legge 4 The Tao is (like) the emptiness of a vessel; and in our employment of it we must be on our guard against all fulness. How deep and unfathomable it is, as if it were the Honoured Ancestor of all things! We should blunt our sharp points, and unravel the complications of things; we should attemper our brightness, and bring ourselves into agreement with the obscurity of others. How pure and still the Tao is, as if it would ever so continue! I do not know whose son it is. It might appear to have been before God. Lau 4 The way is empty, yet use will not drain it. Deep, it is like the ancestor of the myriad creatures. Blunt the sharpness; Untangle the knots; Soften the glare; Let your wheels move only along old ruts. Darkly visible, it only seems as if it were there. I know not whose son it is. It images the forefather of God. Feng/English 4 The Tao is an empty vessel; it is used, but never filled. Oh, unfathomable source of ten thousand things! Blunt the sharpness, Untangle the knot, Soften the glare, Merge with dust. Oh, hidden deep but ever present! I do not know from whence it comes. It is the forefather of the gods. Bill Porter (Red Pine) 4 The Tao is so empty those who use it never become full again and so deep as if it were the ancestor of us all it dulls our edges unties our tangles softens our light and merges our dust it's so clear as if it were present I wonder whose child it is it seems it was here before Ti Star 4 Tao is empty yet it fills every vessel with an endless supply Tao is hidden yet it shines in every corner of the universe With it, the sharp edges become smooth the twisted knots loosen the sun is softened by a cloud the dust settles into place So deep, so pure, so still It has been this way forever You may ask, “Whose child is it?”- but I cannot say This child was here before the Great Ancestor 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
flowing hands Posted March 3, 2017 My only comment is they all don't make any sense! 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dust Posted March 3, 2017 I'm quite selective about what I merge with. 5 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rene Posted March 3, 2017 (edited) To me, Laozi is reflecting the rising and falling, the perpetual nature of all things - and the vastness of the eternal Tao. Of the five renditions offered above, the FengEnglish comes closest, imo; the others have extraneous ideas added in. More words count less; hold fast to the center. (-: . edit typo Edited March 3, 2017 by rene 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dawei Posted March 3, 2017 Merge with dust? Interesting that 'dust' is often thought to represent the negative aspects of life... to get beyond the dusty world but LZ says to merge with it. Feng/English say in Ch. 56: Be at one with the dust of the earth. This is primal union. So I think one can associate dust with Dao or at least Heaven and Earth... but being a primal union, Dao makes the most sense. There is some difference in whether the lines after the first two are then talking about Dao (Porter and Star) or the person (merge with dust). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Michael Sternbach Posted March 4, 2017 Would say Star's translation makes most sense. Along the lines of chapter 15: "Who can wait quietly while the mud settles?" Of course, there may be variations of this translation too... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Marblehead Posted March 4, 2017 Well, Okay. Time for me to speak. Henricks' translation 1. The Way ...2. 3. 4. It (the Way of Dao) files down sharp edges;5. Unties the tangles;6. Softens the glare;7. And settles the dust. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rene Posted March 4, 2017 4. It (the Way of Dao) files down sharp edges; . Can a verb have a 'Way' ? 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dawei Posted March 4, 2017 Well, Okay. Time for me to speak. Henricks' translation 1. The Way ... 2. 3. 4. It (the Way of Dao) files down sharp edges; 5. Unties the tangles; 6. Softens the glare; 7. And settles the dust. That didn't help... go back to your room without dinner 3 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cheya Posted March 4, 2017 (edited) I like what Ellen Chen said about this chapter in her general comment (included below), which helps me make more sense of and see more connections between these first few chapters. Her translation doesn't seem to differ much: 1. Tao is a whirling emptiness, Yet in use is inexhaustible. Fathomless, It seems to be the ancestor of ten thousand beings. 2. It blunts the sharp, Unties the entangled, Harmonizes the bright, Mixes the dust, Dark, It seems perhaps to exist. 3. I do to know whose child it is, It is an image of what precedes God (Ti) Her General Comment (followed by a couple pages of Detailed Comments...) "In Chapter 1 we witness the bifurcation of the everlasting Tao and name into the duality of non-being and being. In chapters 2 and 3 we are given the distinction between natural opposites that arise together and complement each other and value or moral opposites that break up the unity of nature and vitiate human life. In this chapter we see how opposites, which issue from Tao, become again identified when they return to Tao. Tao is the dark womb that pours out (1) and receives back (2) all beings. Its unceasing fecundity is due to its unceasing activity, blending and preparing all that have returned to it for their reemergence into the light of existence. As this unceasing creativity Tao hardly seems to exist, yet it is prior to God or the Lord on High. (Sorry I left out a number of chinese words she includes in the translation. I could put them in if needed/helpful.) Edited March 4, 2017 by cheya 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rene Posted March 4, 2017 I like what Ellen Chen said about this chapter in her general comment (included below), which helps me make more see some connections between these first few chapters. Her translation doesn't seem to differ much: 1. Tao is a whirling emptiness, Yet in use is inexhaustible. Fathomless, It seems to be the ancestor of ten thousand beings. 2. It blunts the sharp, Unties the entangled, Harmonizes the bright, Mixes the dust, Dark, It seems perhaps to exist. 3. I do to know whose child it is, It is an image of what precedes God (Ti) Her General Comment (followed by a couple pages of Detailed Comments...) "In Chapter 1 we witness the bifurcation of the everlasting Tao and name into the duality of non-being and being. In chapters 2 and 3 we are given the distinction between natural opposites that arise together and complement each other and value or moral opposites that break up the unity of nature and vitiate human life. In this chapter we see how opposites, which issue from Tao, become again identified when they return to Tao. Tao is the dark womb that pours out (1) and receives back (2) all beings. Its unceasing fecundity is due to its unceasing activity, blending and preparing all that have returned to it for their reemergence into the light of existence. As this unceasing creativity Tao hardly seems to exist, yet it is prior to God or the Lord on High. (Sorry I left out a number of chinese words she includes in the translation. I could put them in if needed/helpful.) Ohh that's really nice, Cheya, (-: From what book of hers is that? Might try & get it before heading back up tomorrow. Thanks! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cheya Posted March 4, 2017 Hi Rene, Glad you like it! It's from the Tao Te Ching: A New Translation with Commentary. She explains a lot that I just never got from other translations. This was back when I was so into it that I got a bunch of translations... but her commentaries really are helpful at putting things together I otherwise miss. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rene Posted March 4, 2017 Looking forward to reading it. Thanks! (-: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
flowing hands Posted March 4, 2017 I remember this chapter/verse/writings all those years ago and Li Erh saying to me of other translations, " where did they get this from?" (he said this quite a lot actually) This verse is about how incredibly vast and interconnected the Dao is. If you feel you know something about the Dao it will kick you awake and let you know that you actually don't know anything, it is so vast. We go back to Dao xin "look with your heart" Daoist cultivation techniques known only to very few. "See its form in the glare" ie in some lights we can actually see energy as well as feel it. "Be at one with the dust of the Earth, simplify your nature" Again referring to self cultivation techniques. "Ever present, hidden in the depths of the myriad things" He is telling us where to look again, how we can source and cultivate. Remember I started the thread about the DDJ being a shamanistic treatise, not in the modern sense of what people think of shamanism, but in the sense that the verses are about looking at the world from the heart and seeing the processes that are involved which is all about energy and matter and the inter-relationship between both. There lies the heart of the Dao. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Marblehead Posted March 4, 2017 Can a verb have a 'Way' ? I had to speak to Henricks' words not my own understanding. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rene Posted March 4, 2017 Remember I started the thread about the DDJ being a shamanistic treatise, not in the modern sense of what people think of shamanism, but in the sense that the verses are about looking at the world from the heart and seeing the processes that are involved which is all about energy and matter and the inter-relationship between both. There lies the heart of the Dao. Yes, very much so. I applaud your efforts, FlowingHands, and it may be that a few will be able to see what lies beneath your, my, and Laozi's words. But please do not be overly concerned if most do not. Their path is theirs and our path is ours...and I wish you the very best on yours. Warm greetings (-: 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stosh Posted March 4, 2017 .. Something in the way she moves? 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jeff Posted March 5, 2017 The meaning of chapter 4 for me... The Tao is an empty primordial sea of motion and void. It is the motion of this nothingness that gives birth to all that exists (10,000 things). The steps to realize the Tao are hidden inside us, but always available. Those steps are... Quiet the lower emotions, Open the heart, Move beyond the glare of the astral, Merge (become one with) all, and be able to differentiate even the smallest partical of dust. No one knows where the Tao come from, but knowing it gives birth to the Gods/Immortals. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stosh Posted March 5, 2017 IMO Most of Laozi is arranged in explanatory fashion, so one was expected to apprehend rather than learn by osmosis regardless of what Chinese tradition with other texts and subjects may be. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
awaken Posted March 10, 2017 (edited) This chapter talks about the start of immortal, The first view of immortal. The first sentence talks about the first step, the emptiness. The second sentence talks about the second stage of the emptiness, a big hole. The third sentence talks about the changes of the hole. The hole is full of light. at first, the light of the hole has much dust. Then it become clear and pure. Then A immortal show up. At first, it sink and come out. Then it appear like a human. But not a human. This chapter talks about the process of the birth of immortal. Edited March 10, 2017 by awaken Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dawei Posted April 8, 2017 Summary, based on comments: 1. Laozi is reflecting the rising and falling, the perpetual nature of all things - and the vastness of the eternal Tao. 2. This verse is about how incredibly vast and interconnected the Dao is. If you feel you know something about the Dao it will kick you awake and let you know that you actually don't know anything, it is so vast. We go back to Dao xin "look with your heart" Daoist cultivation techniques known only to very few. "See its form in the glare" ie in some lights we can actually see energy as well as feel it. "Be at one with the dust of the Earth, simplify your nature" Again referring to self cultivation techniques. "Ever present, hidden in the depths of the myriad things" He is telling us where to look again, how we can source and cultivate. 3. The Tao is an empty primordial sea of motion and void. It is the motion of this nothingness that gives birth to all that exists (10,000 things).Quiet the lower emotions, Open the heart, Move beyond the glare of the astral,Merge (become one with) all, and be able to differentiate even the smallest partical of dust. 4. This chapter talks about the process of the birth of immortal. the first step, the emptiness... then the second stage of the emptiness, a big hole… then the changes of the hole. The hole is full of light. at first, the light of the hole has much dust, then it become clear and pure, then an immortal show up. At first, it sink and come out. Then it appear like a human. But not a human. 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Marblehead Posted April 8, 2017 Beware of the big (Super Massive) Black Hole though. It does things that defy man's understandings of the physical laws of the universe. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rara Posted April 20, 2020 (edited) Ok, this one is tricky. Very abstract, but this is a fun game. I will contribute something and then read what y'all have put. Firstly, I don't know if I trust Porter as much. Is there any verification that he can actually translate? The meaning (again) to me seems to try and describe Dao and its paradoxical nature, akin to I guess how we practice. Empty yet fulfilled, inexhaustible. Also its nature that it preceded the concept of "God" and things as we know it. The middle section can only mean that its cultivation takes away anything that is overbearing. Sharpness, tight knots and sun all have powerful imagery, and by smoothing sharpness, loosening the knot or adding a bit of cloud to the sun, we meet harmony. Edited April 20, 2020 by Rara 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sketch Posted September 16, 2020 (edited) Verse Four The Trail is flushed clean I’ve seen this, by seasonal rains and flooding, You can see the marks left by this scouring. You can’t horde or stockpile The pathway that natural events follow; You can’t really patent a technique That is there in the world to be learned. 道 This Dao, this pathway, is A skillful abyss, Resembling the scorpion dance As it was done in the ancient temple. It’s edges are blurry. It’s not fastened to anything. It looks just like everything else; camouflage And harmonized light, it’s difficult to see. It’s dust is mingled with all the dust. And yet, it very emphatically seems to exist! I don’t know whose child it is, Where its seed comes from. Before there were symbols, or things symbolized, or God as a concept or as a reality, This is what was there. All of this makes me picture a well-worn, maintained footpath That was once a deer trail which follows the contours of the land in such a way As to follow the watershed. This is simply the natural way For all kinds of living creatures to go, even without the obvious path, or markers of any kind. A peaceful woodland trail Created by all the varieties of movement along its length. Dust motes in a sunbeam Harmonize light filtered through trees It very emphatically seems to exist! It was all there Before there were any blazes marking it. The bit about the scorpion dance Is something I’m getting from the Origins of the Chinese character 萬, wan, meaning lots, another way of saying ten thousand. Remember, if you see a cockroach in your dwelling, you don’t have cockroach. You have cockroaches. You only saw the one. I’ve never seen myriads of scorpions, just ones or twos, but I did once see a hole with an uncountable number of baby rattlesnakes in it. I saw this while hiking along the Appalachian Trail. Edited September 21, 2020 by Sketch 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites