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spring is on the job

so I close the bedroom door

modesty prevails.

 

modesty prevails

carefree girls in skirts and hats

tulips never tell.

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modesty prevails

carefree girls in skirts and hats

tulips never tell.

 

 

tulips never tell

us any flower secrets -

root, stem, petal, leaf.

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tulips never tell

us any flower secrets -

root, stem, petal, leaf.

 

root, stem, petal, leaf.

Birds and bee's seem to know though?

Natures so confused!

:rolleyes:

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root, stem, petal, leaf.

Birds and bee's seem to know though?

Natures so confused!

:rolleyes:

 

natures so confused

and so intertwined, that love

becomes obstruction.

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natures so confused

and so intertwined, that love

becomes obstruction.

 

 

becomes obstruction

does the green fused selfhood

until the bud breaks

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becomes obstruction

does the green fused selfhood

until the bud breaks

 

until the bud breaks

nascent potential yearning

embryo dreaming

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until the bud breaks

nascent potential yearning

embryo dreaming

 

embryo dreaming

in the flicker of an eye

a whole life passes.

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embryo dreaming

in the flicker of an eye

a whole life passes.

 

 

a whole life passes

close by; the other side of

a thin place between

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a whole life passes

close by; the other side of

a thin place between

 

a thin place between

where cheese and tomato dwell

there lies the mustard

 

:)

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a thin place between

where cheese and tomato dwell

there lies the mustard

 

:)

 

There lies the Mustard!!!

EWWWw! Look. You stepped in it ! :P

Squishy between toes?

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There lies the Mustard!!!

EWWWw! Look. You stepped in it ! :P

Squishy between toes?

 

 

squishy between toes

dawn treader of seamens' decks

before they're swabbed

 

 

B)

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squishy between toes

dawn treader of seamens' decks

before they're swabbed

 

 

B)

 

Before they're swabbed

Remove the swaddling cloth

All bums need to bathe! :rolleyes:

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Before they're swabbed

Remove the swaddling cloth

All bums need to bathe! :rolleyes:

 

 

all bums need to bathe

that's the nature of the beast

keeping the way clean

 

:)

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all bums need to bathe

that's the nature of the beast

keeping the way clean

 

:)

 

 

keeping the way clean

dispose of trash ethically!

Soap... to wash the mouth ???

:P

 

(AhhhFLASHBackS!!!Yuck!...Lava soap sucks :angry: )

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keeping the way clean

dispose of trash ethically!

Soap... to wash the mouth ???

:P

 

(AhhhFLASHBackS!!!Yuck!...Lava soap sucks :angry: )

 

 

Soap... to wash the mouth

shower gel for all the rest

clean inside and out.

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Soap... to wash the mouth

shower gel for all the rest

clean inside and out.

 

 

clean inside and out.

All the knowledge of the world

on emerald slabs glow

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clean inside and out.

All the knowledge of the world

on emerald slabs glow

 

 

on emerald slabs glow

photons of your memories

scattered from that dream

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on emerald slabs glow

photons of your memories

scattered from that dream

 

 

scattered from that dream

you awoke with sleepy eyes

found lost in night's daze.

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scattered from that dream

you awoke with sleepy eyes

found lost in night's daze.

 

 

found lost in night's daze

lost found in ecstatic praise

felt through the way's gaze

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emptiness contains,

substance bears uncertainty,

reality is.

 

 

Hi modestman and welcome to the Forum and the haiku chain.

 

Here your haiku's first line must be the last line of the previous haiku. To heal this break you could write one that takes the last line of mine and ends in the first line of yours above, as below, or use my offering...

All the best, and please fell free to add to the chain haiku links again and again.

 

felt through the way's gaze

? ? ? ? ? ? ?

emptiness contains

 

or

 

felt through the way's gaze

life unfolds so openly

emptiness contains

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emptiness contains,

substance bears uncertainty,

reality is.

 

(Hey, My Main Man!

Um? Nice to meet you! :D

So to show, I take your last line!)

 

Reality is,

A questionable at best,

Break in poetry!

 

(Have fun Man!)

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(Hey, My Main Man!

Um? Nice to meet you! :D

So to show, I take your last line!)

 

Reality is,

A questionable at best,

Break in poetry!

 

(Have fun Man!)

 

 

Break in poetry,

Like riding a restless horse,

Proud is modest man.

 

 

(welcome mm :) )

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Break in poetry,

Like riding a restless horse,

Proud is modest man.

(welcome mm :) )

 

Proud is modest man

Parading out on his own

I take your last line

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Proud is modest man

Parading out on his own

I take your last line

 

I take your last line

spinning it thru some wild curves

it's back no harm done

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