trailmaker Posted March 22, 2009 it all fades away my face dissolves into sand waves wash over me waves wash over me the wind then brings only tao along the way, peace Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted March 22, 2009 waves wash over me the wind then brings only tao along the way, peace Hiya Trailmaker ... an excellent addition Just remember in future to take the last line from the last post in the chain to make your haiku along the way, peace my destination is peace where is my bus pass? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted March 22, 2009 Hiya Trailmaker ... an excellent addition Just remember in future to take the last line from the last post in the chain to make your haiku along the way, peace my destination is peace where is my bus pass? where is my bus pass? just the ticket for travel! perhaps I'll walk home. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted March 23, 2009 where is my bus pass? just the ticket for travel! perhaps I'll walk home. perhaps I'll walk home. and reduce my carbon use shame about them cows Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted March 23, 2009 perhaps I'll walk home. and reduce my carbon use shame about them cows shame about them cows nice patch Stig before they ate it... now is bus time Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trailmaker Posted March 23, 2009 it all fades away my face dissolves into sand waves wash over me waves wash over me unseeing but receptive when to surrender? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted March 23, 2009 (edited) waves wash over me unseeing but receptive when to surrender? when to surrender to the path of the chain links one after the last? one after the last shoe sole gone, next bus will be it...now is bus time Hi trailmaker, and thanks for another lovely 5-7-5 haiku! It would be a wonderful new branch on an ever-branching Haiku Tree , a quantum of endless possibilities Here we always begin our next haiku with the last line of the haiku in the most recent post, the last link in the chain before the link we create. Thus the title, Haiku Chain. Again welcome and thank you. Let me set you up again! it...now is bus time! rain day waves of puddle mud waves wash over me Edited March 23, 2009 by artform Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trailmaker Posted March 23, 2009 when to surrender to the path of the chain links one after the last? one after the last shoe sole gone, next bus will be it...now is bus time Hi trailmaker, and thanks for another lovely 5-7-5 haiku! It would be a wonderful new branch on an ever-branching Haiku Tree , a quantum of endless possibilities Here we always begin our next haiku with the last line of the haiku in the most recent post, the last link in the chain before the link we create. Thus the title, Haiku Chain. Again welcome and thank you. Let me set you up again! it...now is bus time! rain day waves of puddle mud waves wash over me waves wash over me carminative cleansing rain transcending the mire Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted March 23, 2009 waves wash over me carminative cleansing rain transcending the mire Thats the way old son transcending the mire my shoe gets stuck in the mud muddy footprint trail Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted March 23, 2009 Thats the way old son transcending the mire my shoe gets stuck in the mud muddy footprint trail muddy footprint trail! He went that way for sure with his shoes on backwards! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zanshin Posted March 23, 2009 muddy footprint trail! He went that way for sure with his shoes on backwards! his shoes on backwards I know he's going to fall in love with a rock. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted March 24, 2009 his shoes on backwards I know he's going to fall in love with a rock. in love with a rock glimmering in its flow of stream liquidity Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thelerner Posted March 24, 2009 in love with a rock glimmering in its flow of stream liquidity Stream liquidity Stream liquidity I say Else we vanish nigh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wayfarer64 Posted March 24, 2009 muddy footprint trail! He went that way for sure with his shoes on backwards! His shoes on backwards Trailing a comets' tail Dark Star-dust surfer Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted March 24, 2009 His shoes on backwards Trailing a comets' tail Dark Star-dust surfer Oops! Broken Chain! How about... else we vanish nigh into dark matter as the Dark Star-dust surfer Yea! Haa! That OK? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted March 24, 2009 Oops! Broken Chain! How about... else we vanish nigh into dark matter as the Dark Star-dust surfer Yea! Haa! That OK? Dark Star-dust surfer Trail of comets through the sky Sky rockets in flight Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trailmaker Posted March 24, 2009 Dark Star-dust surfer Trail of comets through the sky Sky rockets in flight sky rockets in flight joyous in celebration lifting high my cup Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted March 24, 2009 Dark Star-dust surfer Trail of comets through the sky Sky rockets in flight Sky rockets in flight Bits of satellites falling Its busy up there. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trailmaker Posted March 24, 2009 Sky rockets in flight Bits of satellites falling Its busy up there. hi apepch7 - we were down to the wire with that one. it's busy up there satellites spinning soundless but wait what's that noise? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted March 25, 2009 hi apepch7 - we were down to the wire with that one. it's busy up there satellites spinning soundlessly but wait what's that noise? but wait what's that noise? A Vogon bureaucrat ship? Hand me the peanuts Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted March 25, 2009 but wait what's that noise? A Vogon bureaucrat ship? Hand me the peanuts hand me the peanuts my towel and enough fish to gift my way there Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted March 27, 2009 hand me the peanuts my towel and enough fish to gift my way there to gift my way there some glass beads would be handy string me a necklace. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted March 27, 2009 to gift my way there some glass beads would be handy string me a necklace. string me a necklace silver bells and cockle shells how goes the garden? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted March 28, 2009 string me a necklace silver bells and cockle shells how goes the garden? how goes the garden? the seasons cycle away slowly earth rises Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trailmaker Posted March 28, 2009 string me a necklace silver bells and cockle shells how goes the garden? how goes the garden? transitory in nature the seedlings sprouting Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
