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Watch the weather change,

Look forward to the next one,

You've seen it before...

 

You've seen it before...

Sorry? Could you repeat that?

Deja vu again!

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deja vu again

do absolutely nothing,

get wet in the rain

 

get wet in the rain

That's easy! Why not try to ...

get wet in the dry?

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get wet in the rain

That's easy! Why not try to ...

get wet in the dry?

haha brilliant A7 - get wet in the dry eh?!! :lol:

 

 

 

get wet in the dry?

not before noon you would not

discharge the spray-gun...

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haha brilliant A7 - get wet in the dry eh?!! :lol:

 

 

 

get wet in the dry?

not before noon you would not

discharge the spray-gun...

 

Discharge the spray gun

Be careful not to reload

That can lead to fire

Edited by Cosmiken

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Discharge the spray gun

Be careful not to reload

That can lead to fire

 

'That can lead to fire!'

*Throws lighter onto fuel dump*

Wuuumph!!!!! See what I mean?

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'That can lead to fire!'

*Throws lighter onto fuel dump*

Wuuumph!!!!! See what I mean?

Wuuumph!!!!! See what I mean?

Green thru dew is seen

now we dream

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Wuuumph!!!!! See what I mean?

Green thru dew is seen

now we dream

 

now we dream, of life

in funny fragments, unkempt

seaweed hat, smiling

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now we dream, of life

in funny fragments, unkempt

seaweed hat, smiling

 

 

seaweed hat, smiling

beneath possibilities

she wink'd and said: Hi!

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seaweed hat, smiling

beneath possibilities

she wink'd and said: Hi!

 

 

 

She winked and said:Hi!

- and this is the reason for

eighty years on earth!?...

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She winked and said:Hi!

- and this is the reason for

eighty years on earth!?...

 

eighty years on earth

enough time to make black white

not enough for gray

Edited by Cosmiken

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eighty years on earth

enough time to make black white

not enough for gray

 

 

 

Not enough for gray...

the worlds troubles always screen

in black and in white!

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Not enough for gray...

the worlds troubles always screen

in black and in white!

 

 

in black and in white

total absence of all lights

total presence too

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Mountain stillness In a quiet moon The stars rest

 

Cloudhand,

 

I like what you have written and for this reason I don't want to tamper with it ... but we are sticking to the Haiku form of 5,7,5 syllables and using the last line of the preceding haiku as the first line, on this thread.

 

John.

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Mountain stillness In a quiet moon The stars rest

 

quiet moon; the stars rest

cars and trucks speed, roar, and weave

the walker is walked

 

(cheating the 4 4 3 into 5 7 5- apologies, Cloudhand)

Edited by Mark Foote

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quiet moon; the stars rest

cars and trucks speed, roar, and weave

the walker is walked

 

(cheating the 4 4 3 into 5 7 5- apologies, Cloudhand)

 

 

the walker is walked

hearing night sounds, moon silent,

changing; stars in place

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the walker is walked

hearing night sounds, moon silent,

changing; stars in place

 

changing; stars in place

it's on Ptolemy's astrolabe

futures are written.

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changing; stars in place

it's on Ptolemy's astrolabe

futures are written.

 

 

futures are written

in minds, on things, the spaces

within, between them

 

Celebrating your current interest A7 with respect.

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futures are written

in minds, on things, the spaces

within, between them

 

Celebrating your current interest A7 with respect.

within, between them

mind the gap betwixt two thoughts

lengthen the spaces...

Edited by CowTao

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within, between them

mind the gap betwixt two thoughts

lengthen the spaces...

 

lengthen the spaces

between the strides, sink and roll

waves of pavement stretch

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lengthen the spaces

between the strides, sink and roll

waves of pavement stretch

 

waves of pavement stretch

solid white line in the road

no overtaking.

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waves of pavement stretch

solid white line in the road

no overtaking.

No overtaking.

so says the folks dressed in blue -

"Undertakers' Strike"

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No overtaking.

so says the folks dressed in blue -

"Undertakers' Strike"

 

"Undertakers' Strike"

Ptolemy, Pythagoras

Think straight, be here now...

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"Undertakers' Strike"

Ptolemy, Pythagoras

Think straight, be here now...

 

Think straight, be here now...

Bend like starlight round a sun

Know not where or when.

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