Apech Posted May 29, 2010 On 5/28/2010 at 9:43 PM, CowTao said: ^ enjoyed that! else the game is up lest another sucker found just keeps goin 'round... just keeps goin 'round... an unbroken haiku chain its end is the start. (anyone else notice we are in the last 100 towards 3000 posts!) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted May 29, 2010 (edited) On 5/29/2010 at 9:08 AM, apepch7 said: just keeps goin 'round... an unbroken haiku chain its end is the start. (anyone else notice we are in the last 100 towards 3000 posts!) its end is the start of deep fractal recursion woven, slanted light (nope!- ...awesome.) Edited May 29, 2010 by Mark Foote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted May 30, 2010 On 5/29/2010 at 11:58 PM, Mark Foote said: its end is the start of deep fractal recursion woven, slanted light (nope!- ...awesome.) woven, slanted light crisscross its way through the night like an owl in flight... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted May 30, 2010 On 5/30/2010 at 12:14 AM, CowTao said: woven, slanted light crisscross its way through the night like an owl in flight... like an owl in flight... clouds cross the moon, is it wise now to be a mouse? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted May 30, 2010 On 5/30/2010 at 9:08 AM, apepch7 said: like an owl in flight... clouds cross the moon, is it wise now to be a mouse? now to be a mouse? or to be a black gown'd rat? or to be a cat? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted May 31, 2010 On 5/30/2010 at 10:35 PM, artform said: now to be a mouse? or to be a black gown'd rat? or to be a cat? or to be a cat? no, thank you - tin roof too hot sensitive lil' paws... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trailmaker Posted May 31, 2010 sensitive lil' paws so, in soft moonlight seeing prowl the cool meadow Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trailmaker Posted May 31, 2010 prowl the cool meadow black gown'd rats there in darkness mouse goes undisturbed Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted May 31, 2010 On 5/31/2010 at 9:01 PM, trailmaker said: prowl the cool meadow black gown'd rats there in darkness mouse goes undisturbed mouse goes undisturbed the servant of Apollo steals Demeter's grain. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted June 1, 2010 On 5/31/2010 at 10:50 PM, apepch7 said: mouse goes undisturbed the servant of Apollo steals Demeter's grain. steals Demeter's grain to make some wine for Bachus drink divine madness Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted June 1, 2010 (edited) On 6/1/2010 at 12:40 AM, Stigweard said: steals Demeter's grain to make some wine for Bachus drink divine madness drink divine madness there is peace under heaven with moderation with moderation there is peace under heaven along haiku chain along haiku chain pieces of heaven link when divine madness strikes Edited June 1, 2010 by artform Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted June 1, 2010 On 6/1/2010 at 4:14 AM, artform said: drink divine madness there is peace under heaven with moderation with moderation there is peace under heaven along haiku chain along haiku chain pieces of heaven link when divine madness strikes divine madness strikes at those who labor so hard to reach for the Tao... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted June 1, 2010 On 6/1/2010 at 11:04 AM, CowTao said: divine madness strikes at those who labor so hard to reach for the Tao... to reach for the Tao... like stretching to touch the moon, how long is your arm? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trailmaker Posted June 1, 2010 On 6/1/2010 at 12:22 PM, apepch7 said: to reach for the Tao... like stretching to touch the moon, how long is your arm? how long is your arm? indeed, how long need it be to know it's right there Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted June 1, 2010 On 6/1/2010 at 9:11 PM, trailmaker said: how long is your arm? indeed, how long need it be to know it's right there ^ good one, Trailmaker! ..... ..... ..... to know its right there closer than the nose's tip what's there not to see? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted June 1, 2010 On 6/1/2010 at 10:09 PM, CowTao said: ^ good one, Trailmaker! ..... ..... ..... to know its right there closer than the nose's tip what's there not to see? what's there not to see? just a billion billion worlds vast as a pin head. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted June 2, 2010 On 6/1/2010 at 10:21 PM, apepch7 said: what's there not to see? just a billion billion worlds vast as a pin head. vast as a pin head all things suddenly appear when in/out are joined... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest artform Posted June 3, 2010 On 6/2/2010 at 6:48 AM, CowTao said: vast as a pin head all things suddenly appear when in/out are joined... when in/out are joined talking with friends on carbon atom's electron atom's electron planetary world in one finger tip at school finger tip at school kept me soaring through classes between knowledge bits between knowledge bits space and time collapse/expand all the worlds within Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest paul walter Posted June 3, 2010 (edited) On 6/3/2010 at 3:20 AM, artform said: between knowledge bits space and time collapse/expand all the worlds within All the worlds within can't compete with my senses! -a fresh autumn peach... Edited June 3, 2010 by paul walter Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted June 3, 2010 On 6/3/2010 at 7:28 AM, paul walter said: All the worlds within can't compete with my senses! -a fresh autumn peach... -a fresh autumn peach... or all year hydroponics unseasonal fruit. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sifusufi Posted June 3, 2010 On 6/3/2010 at 8:37 AM, apepch7 said: -a fresh autumn peach... or all year hydroponics unseasonal fruit. unseasonal fruit finally from the drought it rains sunshine in a pot Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted June 3, 2010 On 6/3/2010 at 9:01 AM, sifusufi said: unseasonal fruit finally from the drought it rains sunshine in a pot Sifusufi - this Chain is like a game, and games have certain guidelines and rules. Rules suck i know, but once in awhile when we engage in games, we often try to play by them rules. In here, the game requires a 5-7-5 structure to the Haiku. There is 8 syllables in this second line, so that pushes the game wayward slightly. It happens... i made the error too, a few times in fact. Its not a big deal, but i just wanted to bring your attention to it. Pardon me please for putting it back in line. Cheers! unseasonal fruit within the drought rain arrives sunshine in a pot ... ... ... sunshine in a pot moonshine in makeshift barnyards which do you favor? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted June 3, 2010 (edited) On 6/3/2010 at 11:33 AM, CowTao said: sunshine in a pot moonshine in makeshift barnyards which do you favor? which do you favor? a haiku chain with strict rules or just anarchy? :) Edited June 3, 2010 by apepch7 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted June 3, 2010 On 6/3/2010 at 11:43 AM, apepch7 said: which do you favor? a haiku chain with strict rules or just anarchy? :) good one! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sifusufi Posted June 3, 2010 On 6/3/2010 at 11:43 AM, apepch7 said: which do you favor? a haiku chain with strict rules or just anarchy? :) or just anarchy roll it off the tongue quickly sensation the same Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
