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  On 10/1/2010 at 8:27 AM, paul walter said:

:D

 

See the fake tan go

See that old fox trot away

One step, a two step

 

One step, a two step

The light of day breaks

we all are in one thought

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  On 10/1/2010 at 10:45 AM, goonis38 said:

One step, a two step

The light of day breaks

we all are in one thought

 

Hi goonis et al - really nice sequence...this last is neat, but for 5-7-5...

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  On 10/2/2010 at 6:03 PM, trailmaker said:

Hi goonis et al - really nice sequence...this last is neat, but for 5-7-5...

 

but for 5-7-5-

the light of day breaks my thought

a glimpse of heaven

Edited by Mark Foote

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  On 10/2/2010 at 11:04 PM, Mark Foote said:

but for 5-7-5-

the light of day breaks my thought

a glimpse of heaven

 

A glimpse of Heaven

Is in our grasp, just once more

tell day break comes

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  On 10/3/2010 at 1:25 AM, goonis38 said:

A glimpse of Heaven

Is in our grasp, just once more

tell day break comes

 

'til day break comes

the light in our eyes is love

dark as water deep

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  On 10/3/2010 at 4:21 AM, Mark Foote said:

'til day break comes

the light in our eyes is love

dark as water deep

 

dark as water deep

eye-gaze, windows, moment real

stops me in my tracks

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  On 10/3/2010 at 9:00 PM, trailmaker said:

dark as water deep

eye-gaze, windows, moment real

stops me in my tracks

 

 

 

Stops me in my tracks!

foot suspended like my breath...

the gentle brown snake

 

 

 

On two occasions while walking in the bush I almost stepped directly on one of the deadliest snakes in Australia. What I lacked in commonsense (I was reading both times while walking :lol:)I made up for in peripheral vision acuity and reflex action :rolleyes:

Edited by paul walter

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  On 10/4/2010 at 5:56 AM, paul walter said:

Stops me in my tracks!

foot suspended like my breath...

the gentle brown snake

 

 

 

On two occasions while walking in the bush I almost stepped directly on one of the deadliest snakes in Australia. What I lacked in commonsense (I was reading both times while walking :lol:)I made up for in peripheral vision acuity and reflex action :rolleyes:

 

neat anecdote...

 

the gentle brown snake

alert, collected, coiled spring

best not tread just there

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  On 10/4/2010 at 9:13 PM, trailmaker said:

neat anecdote...

 

the gentle brown snake

alert, collected, coiled spring

best not tread just there

 

best not tread just there

best invite all things to read

best take care for all

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  On 10/5/2010 at 1:08 AM, Mark Foote said:

best not tread just there

best invite all things to read

best take care for all

 

 

best take care for all

all for one and one for all

all for all the best

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  On 10/5/2010 at 3:25 AM, artform said:

best take care for all

all for one and one for all

all for all the best

 

all for all the best

no-fault action difficult

the way then wu wei

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  On 10/7/2010 at 10:06 PM, trailmaker said:

all for all the best

no-fault action difficult

the way then wu wei

 

the way then wu wei

one foot, and then no other

night iris, blooming

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  On 10/7/2010 at 11:52 PM, Mark Foote said:

the way then wu wei

one foot, and then no other

night iris, blooming

 

 

night iris, blooming

in night sky, starlight spangles

dew drops on petals

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  On 10/8/2010 at 12:19 AM, artform said:

night iris, blooming

in night sky, starlight spangles

dew drops on petals

 

dew drops on petals

when the morning is earth moist

oh so gentle sun.

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  On 10/9/2010 at 10:10 AM, apepch7 said:

dew drops on petals

when the morning is earth moist

oh so gentle sun.

 

 

oh the gentle sun,

why not burn the world to ash?

garbage men at five!

 

At five am every Tuesday both sunlight and garbage trucks-time to get up <_<:lol:

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  On 10/9/2010 at 10:28 AM, paul walter said:

oh the gentle sun,

why not burn the world to ash?

garbage men at five!

 

garbage men at five

picks up what others discard

lowly junk, priceless...

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  On 10/10/2010 at 11:11 PM, trailmaker said:

lowly junk, priceless

sorting through the day ahead

the time is priceless

 

the time is priceless

while gravity cost a lot

its value's falling.

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  On 10/11/2010 at 6:41 AM, apepch7 said:

the time is priceless

while gravity cost a lot

its value's falling.

its value's falling

like the U.S. currency

ev'ry day more loss

 

;)

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  On 10/11/2010 at 7:01 AM, Stigweard said:
its value's falling

like the U.S. currency

ev'ry day more loss

 

ev'ry day more loss

less stuff more space Just Nuthin'

which way did I go?

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  On 10/11/2010 at 8:04 AM, Trunk said:

ev'ry day more loss

less stuff more space Just Nuthin'

which way did I go?

which way did i go?

not sure that i ever left

did i miss something?

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  On 10/11/2010 at 8:04 AM, Trunk said:

ev'ry day more loss

less stuff more space Just Nuthin'

which way did I go?

 

which way did I go?

'round the usual suspects!

damn the torpedoes

 

:lol:

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  On 10/11/2010 at 2:57 PM, Mark Foote said:

splice 'n dice

 

:lol:

 

did I miss something

what waits for me, do I know?

damn the torpedoes

Edited by Mark Foote

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  On 10/12/2010 at 4:58 AM, Mark Foote said:

did I miss something

what waits for me, do I know?

damn the torpedoes

 

damn the torpedoes

pass the peas, pass the gravy

put away the tears

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