Stigweard

Haiku Chain

Recommended Posts

on the long road home

walking on the dragon's tail

dancing beneath stars

 

dancing beneath stars

the wick without oil flickers

is it time to go?

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

is it time to go?

insinuating bullshit

bad haiku be gone!

 

bad haiku be gone

somebody thinks good and bad

did I miss something?

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

bad haiku be gone

somebody thinks good and bad

did I miss something?

 

did I miss something?

the second I turn my back

the haiku has gone.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Here we find the way

After lifting many stone

Is growing within

 

Is growing within

Down there beside my liver

several gall stones.

 

 

[several] Gall stones...

silently, thrive. [and will be]

[full grown] One day soon.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Full grown one day soon,

Grandmaster P* slaps his brow,

gets "haiku," gets "chain."

 

(*P is assumed to be a syllable here, though "GrandmasterP" could be read with the P as part of the previous syllable too -- Grand-ma-sterp. The capitalizing of the P, however, allows me to guess that this is not how it's intended to be read, so P as a syllable should be legit.)

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

gets "haiku," gets "chain."

This should make a good weapon.

Thought train wrecked: Twelve killed.

 

Thought train wrecked: Twelve killed

Or were they merely sidetracked?

walking on, walk on

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Thought train wrecked: Twelve killed

Or were they merely sidetracked?

walking on, walk on

Walking on, walk on

dont run, lest one trips and falls

gosh! a harsh winter...

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Walking on, walk on

dont run, lest one trips and falls

gosh! a harsh winter...

 

Gosh! a harsh winter...

December San Diego,

blue toes in flip-flops.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

blue crows on ship docks

flipping and flopping like fish

where is that last beer?

Edited by oildrops
  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
Gosh! a harsh winter...

December San Diego,

blue toes in flip-flops.

 

blue toes in flip-flops.

(*sigh* fed up with correcting)

blue crows on ship docks

 

 

blue crows on ship docks

flipping and flopping like fish

where is that last beer?

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

blue toes in flip-flops.

(*sigh* fed up with correcting)

blue crows on ship docks

 

Blue crows on ship docks.

White cat with blue collar strikes.

Blue feathers. Oil drops.

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Blue feathers. Oil drops.

Why can't a ryme continue?

Cue weather, Boil hops

 

Cue weather, Boil hops

barley malt, yeast, and airlock

I prefer mine strong

  • Like 1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites