SEEKER OF TRUTH Posted February 19, 2013 that I can dreamdance life and death, every breath bottoms up, Mordred bottoms up, Mordred but Arthur's on your trail soon so drink up your last Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted February 19, 2013 bottoms up, Mordred but Arthur's on your trail soon so drink up your last so drink up your last when morn breaks its time to fast clean body, clean mind.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan Posted February 19, 2013 clean body, clean mind..washing your body with soapwhile cleansing your mind Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SEEKER OF TRUTH Posted February 19, 2013 while cleansing your mind of thoughts, before sleep awakened new, you shall reap Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SEEKER OF TRUTH Posted February 20, 2013 Awake new, you shall reap the loss of self, from last week best watch, if to keep   I must have been absent, the day when they were teaching counting syllables at school. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
oildrops Posted February 20, 2013 best watch if to keep to the correct haiku form syllabic counting Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan Posted February 20, 2013 syllabic countingwon to three for five... ...seven...Uhhh... five more now... right? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
oildrops Posted February 20, 2013 Uhhh... five more now... right? uhhuh yeah I think that's it postmodern haiku 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted February 20, 2013 Uhhh... five more now... right? uhhuh yeah I think that's it postmodern haiku  postmodern haiku or post anything you want letters for instance. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted February 20, 2013 postmodern haiku or post anything you want letters for instance. letters for instance seems like food for some members weightless yet chewy... 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SEEKER OF TRUTH Posted February 20, 2013 letters for instance seems like food for some members weightless yet chewy... weightless yet chewy..... these high words of haiku..humm perhaps, meaning too.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted February 20, 2013 weightless yet chewy..... these high words of haiku..humm perhaps, meaning too.... Â perhaps, meaning too.... ... memory loss evident in gaps between words. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SEEKER OF TRUTH Posted February 20, 2013 perhaps, meaning too.... ... memory loss evident in gaps between words. Is it OK to have gaps between words....? Maybe I better google this Haiku thing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted February 20, 2013 Is it OK to have gaps between words....? Maybe I better google this Haiku thing. as long as you keep the syllabic structure 5.7.5 anything is ok. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SEEKER OF TRUTH Posted February 20, 2013 perhaps, meaning too.... ... memory loss evident in gaps between words. in gaps between words molecules form, from nothing eyes shut, see clearly Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan Posted February 20, 2013 (edited) eyes shut, see clearlyperpetual reflectionsopen wide, blindness    as long as you keep the syllabic structure 5.7.5 anything is ok. ...nnything is ok.smiley face to save the dayrhyming is okay.  Edited February 20, 2013 by Northern Avid Judo Ant Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
konchog uma Posted February 20, 2013 open wide, blindness too long have i stared at our gorgeous golden star 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Harmonious Emptiness Posted February 20, 2013 Gorgeous golden star Miles from earth yet not so far Mind, sky, all, we are 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted February 20, 2013 (edited) open wide, blindness too long have i stared at our gorgeous golden star    Gorgeous golden star Miles from earth yet not so far Mind, sky, all, we are  (gorgeous golden star you look just like what's-her-name, yes, her from that film.) .... >>>>>>>>>>>too slow  Mind, sky, all, we are spacewalk imagination lost in our own world. Edited February 21, 2013 by Apech 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted February 21, 2013 Mind, sky, all, we are spacewalk imagination lost in our own world. lost in our own world like the 'gods' in Hollywood cower from old age... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SEEKER OF TRUTH Posted February 21, 2013 (edited) cower from old age till you awake from a rage and see lifes homage Edited February 21, 2013 by SEEKER OF TRUTH Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C T Posted February 21, 2013 cower from old age till you awake from a rage and see lifes homage and see life's homage like sandcastles on the beach staying a lil' while... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Harmonious Emptiness Posted February 21, 2013 Staying a lil' while Swaying between sun and moon Coasting; rolling. Soon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan Posted February 21, 2013 Coasting; rolling. Soon.The tides; raising and fallingPulling toward the Moon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
konchog uma Posted February 21, 2013 pulling toward the moon all oneironauts know that the night has less rules 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
