Haiku Chain

[konchog uma]

My carrier return key on my new android tablet doesnt seem to register as a line break

 

Thats a serious haiku setback. If anyone knows how to use codes to create a line break, PM me! Thanks

[Mark Foote]

  On 4/29/2013 at 10:23 PM, Northern Avid Judo Ant said:

NOW you will dissolve...

.... now... aaaand now... now! now! ... dammit...

Why wont you dissolve?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: best haiku chain ever.

 

why won't you dissolve

plop, plop, fizz, nothing doing

gonna know nothing

 

 

  Quote

konchog uma,

 

 

  Quote

just put it in three quote boxes

 

 

  Quote

& we'll know why.

Edited May 3, 2013 by Mark Foote

[SEEKER OF TRUTH]

  On 5/3/2013 at 4:07 AM, Mark Foote said:

why won't you dissolve

plop, plop, fizz, nothing doing

gonna know nothing

gonna know nothing,

soon, just one more think, and then,

gonna know nothing.

[zanshin]

  On 5/3/2013 at 7:57 PM, SEEKER OF TRUTH said:

gonna know nothing,

soon, just one more think, and then,

gonna know nothing.

Gonna know nothing

Floating off to dementia

Softer dimmer still.

[Mark Foote]

  On 5/3/2013 at 8:41 PM, zanshin said:

Gonna know nothing

Floating off to dementia

Softer dimmer still.

 

Softer dimmer still

bubbling in the sunset, dusk

moon shine, in the glass

[Harmonious Emptiness]

moon shine, in the glass

whisky window sows a way

in earnest this hem

[Apech]

  On 5/4/2013 at 5:52 AM, Harmonious Emptiness said:

moon shine, in the glass

whisky window sows a way

in earnest this hem

 

in earnest this hem

the edge of my Taoist cloak

is now in tatters.

[rainbowvein]

  On 5/4/2013 at 8:24 PM, Apech said:

in earnest this hem

the edge of my Taoist cloak

is now in tatters.

Is now in tatters,

ego of chit-chatterer,

after cell phone died.

[Apech]

  On 5/4/2013 at 9:44 PM, rainbowvein said:

Is now in tatters,

ego of chit-chatterer,

after cell phone died.

 

after cell phone died.

I buried my thoughts inside.

never made that call.

[Harmonious Emptiness]

never made that call

said beware doll, thought they

were all kidding you

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

were all kidding you
Wait. That's bad grammar; it's "we're"
Well... In this context.

[Apech]

  On 5/5/2013 at 1:47 AM, Northern Avid Judo Ant said:

were all kidding you

Wait. That's bad grammar; it's "we're"

Well... In this context.

 

Well... In this context,

is a deep hole in the ground

healthy, better, though.

[SEEKER OF TRUTH]

  On 5/9/2013 at 2:21 AM, viator said:

healthy, better, though.

risen from cold, damp, darkness,

confront life again.

confront life again

with the eyes of a new born

see with untaught eyes

[oildrops]

see with untaught eyes

hear with willful naive ears

then forgive the wrongs

[C T]

then forgive the wrongs

practice like a jesus christ

take on the world's pains...

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

Take on the world's pains...
See the ripples as they are...
Firm, but gentle; Calm.



P.S. i've got "world" on 2 syllables.

[Apech]

  On 5/9/2013 at 3:26 PM, Northern Avid Judo Ant said:

Take on the world's pains...

See the ripples as they are...

Firm, but gentle; Calm.

 

 

 

P.S. i've got "world" on 2 syllables.

 

Firm, but gentle; Calm.

or raging like a mad thing

all the same to me.

 

PS. world is one syllable to me ... but I do speak funny.

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

all the same to me
people all speak differently;
Slack jaw Yokel guy.

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

DNR:

  Reveal hidden contents

 

  Reveal hidden contents

Slack jaw Yokel guy.
Gosh, what was his name, again?
Cletus! That was it.

  Reveal hidden contents

Cletus! That was it.
Cletus the slack jaw Yokel.
Simpsons Episode.

 

 

 

Edited May 15, 2013 by Northern Avid Judo Ant

[Mark Foote]

  On 5/9/2013 at 6:04 PM, Northern Avid Judo Ant said:

all the same to me

people all speak differently;

Slack jaw Yokel guy.

 

Slack jaw Yokel guy

drooled a little but alright

broke his tooth, laughing

[rainbowvein]

  On 5/15/2013 at 10:31 PM, Mark Foote said:

Slack jaw Yokel guy

drooled a little but alright

broke his tooth, laughing

Broke his tooth, laughing

Swallowed his tongue, taste buds gone

Shall he go bigu?

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

pure gold you two!

[SEEKER OF TRUTH]

  On 5/15/2013 at 10:50 PM, rainbowvein said:

Broke his tooth, laughing

Swallowed his tongue, taste buds gone

Shall he go bigu?

Shall he go bigu

to the place from whence he came

where the light wanders?

[Harmonious Emptiness]

where the light wanders

waving away, and yet in

stillness it ponders

[SEEKER OF TRUTH]

  On 5/22/2013 at 4:30 AM, Harmonious Emptiness said:

where the light wanders

waving away, and yet in

stillness it ponders

stillness it ponders

searching for itself, it seems,

or lost in a dream?