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stillness it ponders

searching for itself, it seems,

or lost in a dream?

 

or lost in a dream

and he become it; either,

smiles sailing the sky

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fall as acid rain

from a decadent D cell,

sipped again, in youth

 

sipped again, in youth

sampled plenty, off the shelf

thrown back in old age

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sipped again, in youth

sampled plenty, off the shelf

thrown back in old age

 

thrown back in old age

the whiskey of surrender

eyes that have no gleam

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night will turn to day

time for breakfast once again

toast, jam and coffee

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night will turn to day

time for breakfast once again

toast, jam and coffee

 

toast, jam and coffee

with no butter or delay

hot black drink ... sweet crumbs.

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hot black drink ... sweet crumbs.

gentle rain falling on unfolded leaves

how restful my repose

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hot black drink ... sweet crumbs.

gentle rain falling on unfolded leaves

how restful my repose

 

restful my repose

just before I have to go

up and away, now

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up and way now

for my name is Clark Kent

man of steel

 

Chang ... the haiku is supposed to be 5,7,5 syllables. yours is 5.6.3.

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Make my eyes see fire

Vital fire is warm and bright

Fire enlightened all

 

oh I get it...sorry, never done this before...ahem:

 

should I restart chain at broken link?

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How bout this:

 

Man of steel fire eyes

Sparkling sprockets fly left right

Things that spark make light

 

Things that spark make light

Burn my skin when I touch them

Make my eyes see fire

 

Make my eyes see fire
Vital fire is warm and bright
Fire enlightened all

 

(chain fixed!)

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Make my eyes see fire

Vital fire is warm and bright

Fire enlightened all

Fire enlightened all

Imagine how caveman felt

Those brilliant first sparks

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Those brilliant first sparks

Like lightning bugs on the path

Drifting with the breeze

 

Drifting with the breeze

and I'm chillin' in the trees

grooving by degrees.

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Drifting with the breeze

and I'm chillin' in the trees

grooving by degrees.

grooving by degrees

Apech the hiphop artist

a new kind of smoove...

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grooving by degrees

Apech the hiphop artist

a new kind of smoove...

 

A new kind of smoove..

Smoove like badass backflipin'

Ninjas in Japan

Edited by Songtsan

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A new kind of smoove..

Smoove like badass backflipin'

Ninjas in Japan

 

Ninjas in Japan

they're there but you can't see them!

don't get paranoid!

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