Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan Posted July 30, 2013 and cheeky ears too.er, wait... what? What a bad start...You cant start with "and"! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted July 30, 2013 I dont see any instructions http://thetaobums.com/topic/4535-haiku-chain/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted July 30, 2013 and cheeky ears too. er, wait... what? What a bad start... You cant start with "and"! You cant start with "and"! and you can't finish with and and, and, or and and. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan Posted July 30, 2013 oh come on apech. we might as well just start up with gibberish syllables if yer gonna do that!and, and, or and and.The comma makes the difference.Grammar Nazis: HO! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted July 30, 2013 oh come on apech. we might as well just start up with gibberish syllables if yer gonna do that! and, and, or and and. The comma makes the difference. Grammar Nazis: HO! Grammar Nazis: HO! Put a full stop to my life they did, period. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rene Posted July 30, 2013 Grammar Nazis: HO! Put a full stop to my life they did, period. they did, period so now stars in the heavens parentheses me Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted July 30, 2013 they did, period so now stars in the heavens parentheses me parentheses me you be my mum and dad? in inverted commas. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted August 1, 2013 parentheses me you be my mum and dad? in inverted commas. inverted commas like top hats blown on the page like leaves from a birch Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rene Posted August 1, 2013 inverted commas like top hats blown on the page like leaves from a birch like leaves from a birch i rest on soft dry grasses asleep in no wind Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
doc benway Posted August 2, 2013 asleep in no wind my arms outstretched, hovering I wake to the call 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan Posted August 2, 2013 I wake to the callSlumbering desires stir;Must curb indulgence Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted August 2, 2013 I wake to the call Slumbering desires stir; Must curb indulgence Must curb indulgence Although perhaps one more time Caution to the wind. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Taomeow Posted August 2, 2013 Caution to the wind: "You're on the collision course with a large windmill!" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted August 2, 2013 Caution to the wind: "You're on the collision course with a large windmill!" with a large windmill and with a bunch of tulips I'm from Amsterdam. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SEEKER OF TRUTH Posted August 3, 2013 with a large windmill and with a bunch of tulips I'm from Amsterdam. I'm from Amsterdam the land, from wince I just swam all covered in jam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
konchog uma Posted August 4, 2013 all covered in jam right hand on a blue circle gotta stretch for that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Harmonious Emptiness Posted August 5, 2013 gotta stretch for that not much time yet I approach trepidatiously Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark Foote Posted August 5, 2013 (edited) gotta stretch for that not much time yet I approach trepidatiously trepidatiously one foot, then... one foot; bless me, I believe I'm off Edited August 5, 2013 by Mark Foote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Harmonious Emptiness Posted August 5, 2013 I believe I'm off chewing on the idea tough like beef jerky Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RiverSnake Posted August 5, 2013 Tough like beef jerky See talismans and chew toys Happily scratching Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan Posted August 5, 2013 Happily scratchingItching, burning, dermal rashInject off key phrase. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rainbowvein Posted August 5, 2013 Happily scratching Itching, burning, dermal rash Inject off key phrase. Inject off key phrase My irreverence soon t'be Replaced with prayer 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
joeblast Posted August 5, 2013 replaced with prayer opening heart mindfully back, front and below Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rainbowvein Posted August 5, 2013 _/\_ replaced with prayer opening heart mindfully back, front and below back, front and below tenderly permeating myriad spaces Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted August 5, 2013 _/\_ back, front and below tenderly permeating myriad spaces myriad spaces rooms without walls within rooms, mirror me, mirror. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
