Stigweard Posted January 11, 2008 Use the last line of the preceding haiku as the first line of yours. The structure is three lines: 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables Here goes... I toss the pebble Ripples distort the surface Flowing back to self 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
joeblast Posted January 11, 2008 Flowing back to self Inward, or is it outward? Enigma of life Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted January 11, 2008 Enigma of life My mind reaches but it fails The stars seem so far 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
宁 Posted January 11, 2008 The Stars Seem So Far Invard, or is it Outward At this moment, look Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mal Posted January 11, 2008 At this moment, look The light of day fills the world What is hidden still Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Taomeow Posted January 11, 2008 What is hidden still is the marrow of the bones, the innermost yin. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
joeblast Posted January 11, 2008 (edited) What is hidden still? Only what you choose not to see. Openness transcends! doh! ya beat me taomeow the innermost yin too much yang will obscure it feeling, not thinking Edited January 11, 2008 by joeblast Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted January 11, 2008 Feeling, not thinking I tread beneath the moonlight Making my way home Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Taomeow Posted January 12, 2008 Feeling, not thinking I tread beneath the moonlight Making my way home Making my way home or making the Way my home-- who could oppose that?.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VCraigP Posted January 12, 2008 Who could oppose that opposition finds what fault? opposed to return? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Trunk Posted January 12, 2008 Making my way home or making the Way my home-- who could oppose that?.. bloody nose stupid grin one step one trip Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted January 12, 2008 Opposed to return? Retreat from the subtle light? Current sweeps me on Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wun Yuen Gong Posted January 12, 2008 (edited) current sweeps me on like the tide Circles and spirials Edited January 12, 2008 by Wun Yuen Gong Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mal Posted January 12, 2008 Circles and spirals Movement and stillness combined Where does it all start Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mYTHmAKER Posted January 12, 2008 current sweeps me on like the tide Circles and spirials Circles and spirals Sun sets moon rises seasons change Retreat to return Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted January 12, 2008 Retreat to return In returning I become My vision expands 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wun Yuen Gong Posted January 12, 2008 My vision expands like the universal love forever it gives Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted January 12, 2008 forever it gives ever returning again around in circles Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thelerner Posted January 12, 2008 around in circles faster and faster until it all fades away Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted January 12, 2008 it all fades away my face dissolves into sand waves wash over me 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wun Yuen Gong Posted January 12, 2008 waves wash over me like the void only to see light in darkness Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted January 12, 2008 see light in darkness perhaps we are like spiders navigate by stars Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wun Yuen Gong Posted January 12, 2008 navigate by stars rotation of the universe heavenly horses change directions Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stigweard Posted January 12, 2008 navigate by stars rotation of the universe heavenly horses change directions First five syllables Seven syllables is next Five to round it off Heavenly horses Change direction, turn the wheel We hear the echoes Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mYTHmAKER Posted January 12, 2008 Heavenly horses change directions charting unknown galaxies. A pebble is moved. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
