Haiku Chain

[konchog uma]

My carrier return key on my new android tablet doesnt seem to register as a line break

 

Thats a serious haiku setback. If anyone knows how to use codes to create a line break, PM me! Thanks

[Mark Foote]

NOW you will dissolve...

.... now... aaaand now... now! now! ... dammit...

Why wont you dissolve?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: best haiku chain ever.

 

why won't you dissolve

plop, plop, fizz, nothing doing

gonna know nothing

 

 

konchog uma,

 

 

just put it in three quote boxes

 

 

& we'll know why.

Edited May 3, 2013 by Mark Foote

[SEEKER OF TRUTH]

why won't you dissolve

plop, plop, fizz, nothing doing

gonna know nothing

gonna know nothing,

soon, just one more think, and then,

gonna know nothing.

[zanshin]

gonna know nothing,

soon, just one more think, and then,

gonna know nothing.

Gonna know nothing

Floating off to dementia

Softer dimmer still.

[Mark Foote]

Gonna know nothing

Floating off to dementia

Softer dimmer still.

 

Softer dimmer still

bubbling in the sunset, dusk

moon shine, in the glass

[Harmonious Emptiness]

moon shine, in the glass

whisky window sows a way

in earnest this hem

[Apech]

moon shine, in the glass

whisky window sows a way

in earnest this hem

 

in earnest this hem

the edge of my Taoist cloak

is now in tatters.

[rainbowvein]

in earnest this hem

the edge of my Taoist cloak

is now in tatters.

Is now in tatters,

ego of chit-chatterer,

after cell phone died.

[Apech]

Is now in tatters,

ego of chit-chatterer,

after cell phone died.

 

after cell phone died.

I buried my thoughts inside.

never made that call.

[Harmonious Emptiness]

never made that call

said beware doll, thought they

were all kidding you

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

were all kidding you
Wait. That's bad grammar; it's "we're"
Well... In this context.

[Apech]

were all kidding you

Wait. That's bad grammar; it's "we're"

Well... In this context.

 

Well... In this context,

is a deep hole in the ground

healthy, better, though.

[SEEKER OF TRUTH]

healthy, better, though.

risen from cold, damp, darkness,

confront life again.

confront life again

with the eyes of a new born

see with untaught eyes

[oildrops]

see with untaught eyes

hear with willful naive ears

then forgive the wrongs

[C T]

then forgive the wrongs

practice like a jesus christ

take on the world's pains...

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

Take on the world's pains...
See the ripples as they are...
Firm, but gentle; Calm.



P.S. i've got "world" on 2 syllables.

[Apech]

Take on the world's pains...

See the ripples as they are...

Firm, but gentle; Calm.

 

 

 

P.S. i've got "world" on 2 syllables.

 

Firm, but gentle; Calm.

or raging like a mad thing

all the same to me.

 

PS. world is one syllable to me ... but I do speak funny.

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

all the same to me
people all speak differently;
Slack jaw Yokel guy.

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

DNR:

 

Slack jaw Yokel guy.
Gosh, what was his name, again?
Cletus! That was it.

Cletus! That was it.
Cletus the slack jaw Yokel.
Simpsons Episode.

 

 

 

Edited May 15, 2013 by Northern Avid Judo Ant

[Mark Foote]

all the same to me

people all speak differently;

Slack jaw Yokel guy.

 

Slack jaw Yokel guy

drooled a little but alright

broke his tooth, laughing

[rainbowvein]

Slack jaw Yokel guy

drooled a little but alright

broke his tooth, laughing

Broke his tooth, laughing

Swallowed his tongue, taste buds gone

Shall he go bigu?

[Vanir Thunder Dojo Tan]

pure gold you two!

[SEEKER OF TRUTH]

Broke his tooth, laughing

Swallowed his tongue, taste buds gone

Shall he go bigu?

Shall he go bigu

to the place from whence he came

where the light wanders?

[Harmonious Emptiness]

where the light wanders

waving away, and yet in

stillness it ponders

[SEEKER OF TRUTH]

where the light wanders

waving away, and yet in

stillness it ponders

stillness it ponders

searching for itself, it seems,

or lost in a dream?