SpringForestDragon Posted May 14, 2008 Bob's Big Boy drops into snake creeps down finding only tao? Ahh? I think my accent/lack of one makes me count differently! Sorry about that! Peace! Shon Finding only Tao the pond becomes clear in stillness inside Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mYTHmAKER Posted May 14, 2008 The first line is 5 syllable's The second line is 7 The third is 5 Otherwise it ain't Hiku If not sure you can check a word in the dictionary Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shontonga Posted May 14, 2008 The first line is 5 syllable's The second line is 7 The third is 5 Otherwise it ain't Hiku If not sure you can check a word in the dictionary NOooo? ... that don't work??? that's 8,7,4 and an extra line with 7, so silly ; ) first line is five beats second line is seven beats third line five. Hiku? could be wrong. Whops, forgot should pick up last line! >Finding only Tao >the pond becomes clear >in stillness inside In stillness inside with any question you wish just settle and sit Thanks Myth! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SpringForestDragon Posted May 15, 2008 The first line is 5 syllable's The second line is 7 The third is 5 Otherwise it ain't Hiku If not sure you can check a word in the dictionary You mean Haiku? I prefer Haiku-ish. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thelerner Posted May 15, 2008 I prefer Haiku-ish. I do Haiku-ish It can rhyme- if I wish-ish Don't like it? Go fish Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shontonga Posted May 23, 2008 (edited) I do Haiku-ish It can rhyme- if I wish-ish Don't like it? Go fish Don't like it, Go fish! in the creek that's mountain fed. under deep blue skies! edited because ~ I Can't spell Edited May 23, 2008 by shontonga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Taomeow Posted May 23, 2008 Don't like it, Go fish! in the creek that's mountain fed. under deep blue skies! edited because ~ I Can't spell Under deep blue skies the sounds of Stones' Paint It Black materialize Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rain Posted May 23, 2008 Under deep blue skies the sounds of Stones' Paint It Black materialize Mater realize I cannot spell reborn like a tender babe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shontonga Posted May 23, 2008 Mater realize I cannot spell reborn like a tender babe a tender baby open now to all that is. How bright the stars shine! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wayfarer64 Posted May 24, 2008 a tender baby open now to all that is. How bright the stars shine! How bright the stars are Does fame build Intelligence? Don't believe your press! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shontonga Posted May 24, 2008 How bright the stars are Does fame build Intelligence? Don't believe your press! Don't believe Your press!?! Fix Those feet ... and now roll back ! Into single whip. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mgd Posted May 27, 2008 Into single whip Movement ends, body stands firm Spring rain falls, roots sprout Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shontonga Posted May 27, 2008 Into single whip Movement ends, body stands firm Spring rain falls, roots sprout Spring rain falls, roots sprout Leathery leaves open wide to play in the wind Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wayfarer64 Posted May 27, 2008 Spring rain falls, roots sprout Leathery leaves open wide to play in the wind To play in the wind Sailors sniff the breeze for land Lubbers fly their kites Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mgd Posted May 27, 2008 (edited) To play in the wind Sailors sniff the breeze for land Lubbers fly their kites Lubbers fly their kites While they picnic by the shore Wet feet happy smiles Edited May 27, 2008 by mgd Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
justme Posted May 30, 2008 Wet feet happy smiles Joy found jumping in puddles Rainbow coloured sky Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wayfarer64 Posted May 31, 2008 Wet feet happy smiles Joy found jumping in puddles Rainbow coloured sky Rainbow colored sky! It was sky blue this morning... Did I drop some acid? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shontonga Posted May 31, 2008 Rainbow colored sky! It was sky blue this morning... Did I drop some acid? Did i drop some acid? Is that why your Glowing! WOW. Living lights in Blue! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wayfarer64 Posted May 31, 2008 Did i drop some acid? Is that why your Glowing! WOW. Living lights in Blue! Living lights in blue Miles Davis kinda blue Like Muddy Waters Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
justme Posted May 31, 2008 Like muddy waters Is the mind that grasps at gain Golden Body craze Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Apech Posted June 1, 2008 (edited) Like muddy waters Is the mind that grasps at gain Golden Body craze Golden body craze Solved by this my silver mind A hoard of nothing Edited June 1, 2008 by apepch7 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rain Posted June 1, 2008 (edited) Golden body craze Solved by this my silver mind A hoard of nothing A hoard of nothing BuffaLow buff a high ho Where did Santa go? Edited June 1, 2008 by rain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
doc benway Posted June 2, 2008 A hoard of nothing BuffaLow buff a high ho Where did Santa go? Where did Santa go? How to transport tons of toys Without a worm-hole... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shontonga Posted June 2, 2008 Where did Santa go? How to transport tons of toys Without a worm-hole... Without a worm-whole this apple is less than fine! Look! The other half. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dharmabum Posted June 2, 2008 Without a worm-whole this apple is less than fine! Look! The other half. Look! The other half Yin and Yang in unity The universe rests Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
