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  On 8/29/2019 at 5:49 AM, Earl Grey said:

 

Karma bit their ass,

dogma still eats the people’s

souls. When does it end?

 

Souls. When does it end?

What?  Does infinity have

a limitation?

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  On 8/29/2019 at 9:02 AM, Apech said:

 

Souls. When does it end?

What?  Does infinity have

a limitation?

 

A limitation?

A bird in a cage still chirps.

Music to deaf ears.  

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  On 8/29/2019 at 4:10 PM, Taomeow said:

 

A limitation?

A bird in a cage still chirps.

Music to deaf ears.  

 

Music to deaf ears

A sight for blind eyes--walking

hand in hand, alone

 

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  On 8/29/2019 at 4:31 PM, Mark Foote said:

 

Music to deaf ears

A sight for blind eyes--walking

hand in hand, alone

 

 

Hand in hand, alone,

“your hand in mine”: Explosions

in the Sky: great band!

 

 

 

Edited by Earl Grey

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  On 8/29/2019 at 4:31 PM, Mark Foote said:

 

Music to deaf ears

A sight for blind eyes--walking

hand in hand, alone

 

  

(Sorry, couldn't figure out how to delete this insert).  I wrote before seeing Mr. Gray's ditty.

 

 

 

Edited by manitou
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  On 9/1/2019 at 11:16 PM, manitou said:

  

(Sorry, couldn't figure out how to delete this insert).  I wrote before seeing Mr. Gray's ditty.

 

 

 


Manitou's response to my previous haiku, which I liked (and she deleted):

hand in hand, alone

they feel the current of love

under fuschia skies

 

Earl Grey's response to my haiku:

 

Hand in hand, alone,

“your hand in mine”: Explosions

in the Sky: great band!

My haiku, to follow Earl Gray's:

in the sky:  great band

ears to hear the sky's wavelength

few and far between

 

Edited by Mark Foote
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  On 9/2/2019 at 5:25 AM, Mark Foote said:


in the sky:  great band

ears to hear the sky's wavelength

few and far between

 

 

few and far between

wind-blown early autumn leaves 

mild winter beckons.... 

 

 

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  On 9/6/2019 at 2:10 AM, steve said:

mild winter beckons...

Thom cats  wailing in tandem,

glistening sky song 


glistening sky song

blue and orange on the water
no other, resting

(I cheat, yes ;) )

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  On 9/6/2019 at 2:57 AM, Mark Foote said:


glistening sky song

blue and orange on the water
no other, resting

(I cheat, yes ;) )

 

No other resting

place as welcoming as death

that brings you back home. 

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that brings you back home

please cheat and take the shortcut

right to yore front door!

Edited by sagebrush
additional thought

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  On 9/7/2019 at 4:18 PM, sagebrush said:

that brings you back home

please cheat and take the shortcut

right to yore front door!

 

right to yore front door

the door of yore, at the lake
half a million old


Konocti-from-Glenhaven_DSCN5264.jpg

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  On 9/7/2019 at 5:17 PM, Mark Foote said:

 

right to yore front door

the door of yore, at the lake
half a million old
 


half a million old
not necessarily young

just then, the wind lifts

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  On 9/8/2019 at 5:01 PM, steve said:

 

a bird on the wing

no trace at all in the sky

remains in its wake

 

remains in its wake.....

what a lousy phrase to draw

when writing haiku

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  On 9/8/2019 at 5:13 PM, manitou said:

 

remains in its wake.....

what a lousy phrase to draw

when writing haiku


when writing haiku
the parting shot must sail on
past the barricades

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  On 9/9/2019 at 12:27 AM, sagebrush said:

sky of mind, that is

A Deep Breakfast with Ray Lynch

hot cup o'  Quandra

  

 

hot cup o' Quandra

Tell me WTF that is....

coffee works for me  :D

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  On 9/9/2019 at 4:00 PM, manitou said:

  

 

hot cup o' Quandra

Tell me WTF that is....

coffee works for me  :D

 

Coffee works for me...

Except for when it doesn't. 

You're my cup of tea. 

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  On 9/9/2019 at 4:08 PM, Earl Grey said:

 

Coffee works for me...

Except for when it doesn't. 

You're my cup of tea. 

 

You're my cup of tea

- typed with such charm we all fell

into warm silence

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  On 9/28/2019 at 7:57 PM, ilumairen said:

 

You're my cup of tea

- typed with such charm we all fell

into warm silence

 

Into warm silence

summer now becomes autumn

Leaves dance in the wind

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