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Haiku chaos reins

peace burdens the unwilling

unknowable truth

 

unknowable truth?

So what is it? What was it?

How do you not know?

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unknowable truth?

So what is it? What was it?

How do you not know?

 

unknowable it is

words can't describe it

one has to be to know

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The ego is near

More talk less feeling is truth

Go right now in peace

 

-Chris

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Victory, Heaven,

am I coming or going

There's no place like home

 

there's no place like home

hit one out of the ball park

ruby slip and slide

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unknowable it is

words can't describe it

one has to be to know

 

 

Sorry but you are supposed to start with last line above - so it would have to be:

 

How do you not know?

words can't describe it

one has to be to know

 

then:

 

one has to be to know

to find a place with a heart

go right now in peace

 

 

go right now in peace

the mind is clear, love prevails

victory, heaven

 

Victory, Heaven,

am I coming or going

There's no place like home

 

there's no place like home

hit one out of the ball park

ruby slip and slide

 

and so on.

Edited by apepch7

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Sorry but you are supposed to start with last line above - so it would have to be:

 

How do you not know?

words can't describe it

one has to be to know

 

then:

 

one has to be to know

to find a place with a heart

go right now in peace

go right now in peace

the mind is clear, love prevails

victory, heaven

 

Victory, Heaven,

am I coming or going

There's no place like home

 

there's no place like home

hit one out of the ball park

ruby slip and slide

 

and so on.

 

 

ruby slip and slide

strawberry fields forever

crushed berries on shoe

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ruby slip and slide

strawberry fields forever

crushed berries on shoe

 

crushed berries on shoe

staining the carpet, footprints

there once was a man

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crushed berries on shoe

staining the carpet, footprints

there once was a man

 

there once was a man

but now post-op we're not sure

how to address him.

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there once was a man

but now post-op we're not sure

how to address him.

 

how to address him,

his name was Robert Paulson,

that was him, indeed

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how to address him,

his name was Robert Paulson,

that was him, indeed

 

 

that was him, indeed

he/she in the space between,

surgery or not

 

(referring to friend a group of us are helping through his/her journey)

 

or

 

that was him, indeed

he/she in the space between

surgery or naught

 

or

 

that was him, indeed

he/she in the space between

surgery or knot

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that was him, indeed

he/she in the space between,

surgery or not

 

(referring to friend a group of us are helping through his/her journey)

 

or

 

that was him, indeed

he/she in the space between

surgery or naught

 

or

 

that was him, indeed

he/she in the space between

surgery or knot

 

Surgery or knot?

I would like reconstruction

and fix my split ends!

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Surgery or knot?

I would like reconstruction

and fix my split ends!

 

and fix my split ends

dividing oblivion

where did they begin?

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and fix my split ends

dividing oblivion

where did they begin?

 

where did they begin?

was only water first

with desire came being not-being

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where did they begin?

was only water first

with desire came being not-being

 

with desire came being not-being

dead haiku decomposing

seeds sprout in compost

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with desire came being not-being

dead haiku decomposing

seeds sprout in compost

 

seeds sprout in compost

dead leaves, leaves death far behind

life branches skyward.

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seeds sprout in compost

dead leaves, leaves death far behind

life branches skyward.

 

 

life branches skyward

light communicates within

bacterial call

 

bacterial call

aggregating survival

energetics' life

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seeds sprout in compost

dead leaves, leaves death far behind

life branches skyward.

 

life branches skyward

breath roots in earth

breathing through heels nourishes it

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life branches skyward

breath roots in earth

breathing through heels nourishes it

 

Heya Dwai ... cheers for your beautiful creativity. The Haiku formate is

 

5 syllables

7 syllables

5 syllables

 

breathing through the heels

drawing on ancient essence

the fountain flows forth

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Heya Dwai ... cheers for your beautiful creativity. The Haiku formate is

 

5 syllables

7 syllables

5 syllables

 

breathing through the heels

drawing on ancient essence

the fountain flows forth

 

the fountain flows forth

crowing glory streams skyward

divine bubble bath

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the fountain flows forth

crowing glory streams skyward

divine bubble bath

 

divine bubble bath

the scholar warrior at war

break all shackles

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divine bubble bath

the scholar warrior at war

break all shackles

 

break all sh...shackles....

ch...ch...chain....chain of foo-ools...

play the weakest link

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break all sh...shackles....

ch...ch...chain....chain of foo-ools...

play the weakest link

 

play the weakest link

for weakness is also strength

the wise seem foolish

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play the weakest link

for weakness is also strength

the wise seem foolish

 

the wise seem foolish

foolish writers and readers

a heavenly match

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