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  apepch7 said:

scoop up some heartbeat,

stir in a gentle lentil

food for the belly.

 

food for the belly

warm bed at night- I think of

Geronimo's fate

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  Mark Foote said:

How special to learn

the bonesmen are grave robbers

scarred still by the chief

 

 

scared still by the chief

more powerful than they know

beyond space and time

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  immortal_sister said:

scared still by the chief

more powerful than they know

beyond space and time

 

 

 

 

Beyond space and time

Ah.....

Today I forgot what democracy means

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Geronimo's fate?

Precott Bush who stole his skull

could tell you, but won't

 

 

could tell you, but won't

not until I've finished school

how special to learn.

 

(fix number one :) )

 

 

 

  Mark Foote said:

How special to learn

the bonesmen are grave robbers

scarred still by the chief

 

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scared still by the chief

more powerful than they know

beyond space and time

 

 

 

 

 

  paul walter said:

Beyond space and time

Ah.....

Today I forgot what democracy means

 

Nice Paul but it needs to be 5,7,5 syllables, so :

 

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Beyond space and time

Ah...Today I forgot what

democracy means.

 

 

Democracy means

I get to vote now and then

for another clown.

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  apepch7 said:

Democracy means

I get to vote now and then

for another clown.

for another clown

who gives us all joyful mirth

I'd give my last cent

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  Stigweard said:

for another clown

who gives us all joyful mirth

I'd give my last cent

 

 

I'd give my last cent

cos we're on page one hundred

of this haiku chain.

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  paul walter said:

Beyond space and time

Ah.....

Today I forgot what democracy means

 

 

Today I forgot

what democracy means, Ah...

then best think it through

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  trailmaker said:

Today I forgot

what democracy means, Ah...

then best think it through

 

 

Oh! Oh!

 

then best think it through

as this haiku chain heals, cheers!

to those who partake

 

;)

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  artform said:

then best think it through

as this haiku chain heals, cheers!

to those who partake

 

To those who partake

In morning meditation

Lazy winter sun

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  soaring crane said:

To those who partake

In morning meditation

Lazy winter sun

 

 

Lazy winter sun

Over-ripened apricot

My breath is like steam.

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  apepch7 said:

Lazy winter sun

Over-ripened apricot

My breath is like steam.

 

 

my breath is like steam

quietened by hearts silence

I move in stillness

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  rain said:

 

 

my breath is like steam

quietened by hearts silence

I move in stillness

 

I move in stillness

The sheer curtains whispering

Things I can not hear

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  soaring crane said:

I move in stillness

The sheer curtains whispering

Things I can not hear

Things i can not hear

Shall not be called things henceforth

Listen to Silence...

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  CowTao said:

Things i can not hear

Shall not be called things henceforth

Listen to Silence...

 

 

Listen to Silence...

the liquid air is humming

a green sun rises.

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  apepch7 said:

Listen to Silence...

the liquid air is humming

a green sun rises.

A green sun rises

partly obscured by the clouds

tinted crimson and pink..

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  CowTao said:

A green sun rises

partly obscured by the clouds

tinted crimson and pink..

 

 

so fine set of threads

amateurs though we may be.

 

oops - may I adjust?

 

crimson tint and pink..

maybe a Big Sur sunup

rise to start your day..

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  trailmaker said:

so fine set of threads

amateurs though we may be.

 

tinted crimson and pink..

maybe a Big Sur sunrise

to start your day..

 

hmmmmm 5-7-5

 

 

rise to start your day

each cell as gossamer fog

dances up to one

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  artform said:

hmmmmm 5-7-5

rise to start your day

each cell as gossamer fog

dances up to one

dances up to one

and then dances back to two

shuffle step to three

 

(Haiku 2000 coming up :D ... GO TEAM !!!)

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  Stigweard said:

dances up to one

and then dances back to two

shuffle step to three

 

 

Shuffle step to three

Count eighty four prayer flags

flitting in the breeze..

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  CowTao said:

Shuffle step to three

Count eighty four prayer flags

flitting in the breeze..

 

 

flitting in the breeze

mitochondri's energies

breathe life through us all

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  artform said:

flitting in the breeze

mitochondri's energies

breathe life through us all

 

 

Breathe life through us all

Before we asphyxiate

False Hope, Obama

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